Saturday, July 29, 2006

"Bird of Armor"



Made of metal not able to fly

wings carved from this clump of heavy substance

hewn into the shape of something meant to soar

some cruel joke that has no understanding

standing very still waiting for the burst of wind

that is big enough to lift this load

into the sky and far away

where other birds are made by something

bigger than man

9 Comments:

Blogger Letha Sandison said...

Beautfiul poem Darlene!!! I love to see YOUR creativity!! I also love that bird, it is SO sweet! Love it's big feet :)

11:28 AM  
Blogger megg said...

that was beautiful! I got chills. xoox

1:14 AM  
Anonymous angela marie said...

something meant to soar
some cruel joke
standing very still, waiting for
the burst of wind
that is big enough to lift this
load

wow darlene, this touched me
I understand this...

love you sweetie

7:22 AM  
Blogger Bohemian Girl said...

beautiful sis.
just beautiful.

i love you!

9:13 AM  
Blogger bb said...

This is beautiful. You are feeling your mortality at the moment? The way you tackle illness in your life is an inspiration. Hope life is finding you resilient at the moment, much love x x x


(And I'm so touched and blessed by your last comment at my blog Darlene. If you ever want to write to me directly I'm bbharnett@hotmail.co.uk I'd love to hear from you :-))

10:46 AM  
Blogger la vie en rose said...

beautiful, beautiful, beautiful!

2:03 PM  
Blogger Turquoise CRO said...

SWEET! D! like YOU! Yes, we have to email, my email is on my CroStuff link! xoxooxo

4:52 PM  
Blogger brittany said...

poor cute little birdie.

6:47 PM  
Blogger liz elayne said...

this is beautiful. wow. wow.
i want to read more where that came from.

12:05 AM  

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